Yay sequel! I'll start colo...13 pages.... In all seriousness this was okay. Honestly when I heard you doing a sequel to it I half hoped Mrs. Hyuuga would show up. This one didn't really have the same level of fun as the last, it focused mostly on Naruto and Hanabi with little Hinata. It feels weird since Naruto and Hinata are married and some of this seemed like Naruto and Hanabi going behind her back. Also, seriously, no pregnant sex scenes? Pregnant women can get super horny. Also super bitch, super sad, really super anything.
Well it was 13 pages long. and was what the requester wanted. and it was under Hinata's consent that they had sex, which eliminates cheating, but, yeah, I know what you mean.
and yes. Maybe if I had more pages their might have been, but I had limited pages to work with.
I understand your hands are tied to an extent by the requester. This does seem like a lot of work are a mare request you're not getting paid for. Even with saying they have Hinata's consent it still feels like sneaking around with the shower scene and all. 13 pages isn't that limited, there were a few places I could see it getting squeezed in.
'squeezed in' is a key word there. if i have to squeeze something in, then it's not worth ruining a story for it. It would mean, cutting, or expanding. expanding means more pages. cutting means, less of what the requester wanted. and yeah, it was. I'm not doing them this long anymore. a few more will come, before it's totally cut down, though, since i already agreed to them. If you recall my recent DA journal, its comics like this that have made me consider the page limits.
Yay sequel! I'll start colo...13 pages....
ReplyDeleteIn all seriousness this was okay. Honestly when I heard you doing a sequel to it I half hoped Mrs. Hyuuga would show up.
This one didn't really have the same level of fun as the last, it focused mostly on Naruto and Hanabi with little Hinata. It feels weird since Naruto and Hinata are married and some of this seemed like Naruto and Hanabi going behind her back.
Also, seriously, no pregnant sex scenes? Pregnant women can get super horny. Also super bitch, super sad, really super anything.
Well it was 13 pages long. and was what the requester wanted. and it was under Hinata's consent that they had sex, which eliminates cheating, but, yeah, I know what you mean.
Deleteand yes. Maybe if I had more pages their might have been, but I had limited pages to work with.
I understand your hands are tied to an extent by the requester. This does seem like a lot of work are a mare request you're not getting paid for. Even with saying they have Hinata's consent it still feels like sneaking around with the shower scene and all.
Delete13 pages isn't that limited, there were a few places I could see it getting squeezed in.
'squeezed in' is a key word there. if i have to squeeze something in, then it's not worth ruining a story for it. It would mean, cutting, or expanding. expanding means more pages. cutting means, less of what the requester wanted. and yeah, it was. I'm not doing them this long anymore. a few more will come, before it's totally cut down, though, since i already agreed to them.
DeleteIf you recall my recent DA journal, its comics like this that have made me consider the page limits.
Yes, I do remember you saying that. I also remember you saying that in a journal years ago. I would source it, but DA deleted them all last August.
Deletevery well made and entertaining
ReplyDeleteniiiice =P
ReplyDeleteIt was good but Hinata was barely in it.
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