Thursday 14 September 2017

The Fall of Hinata

WARNING: CONTAINS THEMES NOT FOR ALL.











13 comments:

  1. You are a good artist. Just wish the commission wasn't based off of so many netorare hentai (blackmail, cheating addiction to dirty sex instead of loving). While I don't like the material, I respect your skills and that you respect people's requests.

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  2. I would have been fine with the story if only it involved anyone other that Hinata and Naruto. Breaking them apart is depressing.

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    1. Thats why, in the end, i got permission to make this a letter to naruto, and end it with her wanting to meet him. It gives a chance for them to get back together.

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    2. Does that mean there's going to be a sequel or additional page?

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    3. One hasn't been commissioned, no. but I have left it open for people to choose what happens for themselves.

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    4. I would like to request a comic story. I had 3 ideas that I would like to made a reality. Wich one I will order first will depend on how much will cost each one.

      The 1 idea is a Boruto/Sumire/Sarada. We see Boruto and Sumire having some fun with Sarada Looking at them at the distance. Then some of Boruto clones take her to were the original and Sumire are, are some moments Sarada also join the fun.

      The 2 idea is a Naruto/Hinata/Shizuka. They ended having to spend some time together and after a while Hinata and Shizuka have a girl talk and one thing leave to another.

      The 3 idea is the chapter 3 of your ficc Sister Love. We see how the years have passed and now Boruto(minato in your ficc), Himawari, Hanabi's child and maybe adding another had to deal with the fact that their family is a harem base and with their special eyes they see how Naruto/Hinata and Hanabi get some fun each night.

      That is just the basic concept of each idea, there is more but I would wait for your answer to send you the rest of the deatails.

      I would like them to be a draw of just pencil, and also to know the way that I can send you the money.

      my email is ferduran2003@yahoo.com

      Until the next time.

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  3. I can see Naruto in rage killing everyone including the blackmailer and trying to fix Hinata again but she is to broken

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  4. Reading this ruined the image of Hinata for me...there are some things I can't unsee...😔

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  5. this was a good change of pace. Matt you gave people the warning about what this was so any complaints is on them since they should have read the warning before hand on what this was. espeically given how many other Hinata cheating works there already are.

    now as for me i liked it since it's a nice change of pace to the normal romance stuff. i hope to see you try more of Hinata in similar siutations from time to time though i guess me personally i like see Sasuke be the asshole jerk who would do this to Hinata behind Naruto's back lol if you do a another SasuHina cheating or NTR story i think it would add more shock value if Himawari ended being taken by Sasuke when she reached the right age though i guess in most Japan media youngest they go for is 16 or 15 to 18. so that would be your call on that. it also adds more shock value if Hinata got pregnant by her blackmailers.

    anyway just letting you know you do what you feel like doing even if it's a change of pace deal from the usual romance stuff cause you gave everyone fair warning so don't let negative comments get you.

    P.S.

    I hope to see similar things happen to Hinata in Princess Rescue should you continue it since it looks like Hinata is either at her limit or won't be able to fight off men's advances on her. I'm still surprised at how she's still a virgin despite being captive for i guess a few days now while Naruto and his party make their way to find her while also getting to sleep with other girls.

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  6. nice to read. and can't wait to see more of your art in the near future. i also hope to of a new chapter of x-rank missions.

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  7. This is hot, but at the same time it kinda breaks my heart seeing Hinata like this.

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  8. This is hot, but at the same time it kinda breaks my heart seeing Hinata like this.

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